tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post4238031687409027913..comments2011-08-13T01:17:04.241-07:00Comments on writing prism: DECEPTIVE TOYSEruhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17552050374873842838noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-65049687956285610272011-08-11T16:19:33.277-07:002011-08-11T16:19:33.277-07:00You rhyme well - and all the while without losing ...You rhyme well - and all the while without losing the essential relation to the theme. Aptly written! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-42926660661192589052011-03-22T11:46:25.220-07:002011-03-22T11:46:25.220-07:00Blank spaces in the mind hold expressions in the d...Blank spaces in the mind hold expressions in the dark. I'd love to read you more.Nitin krishna padindalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159439295174906052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-83678556556927509202009-05-26T14:59:19.925-07:002009-05-26T14:59:19.925-07:00Very well written indeed. Its one thing to hold a ...Very well written indeed. Its one thing to hold a concept - its quite another to convey so clearly in a poem. Its a rare talent - cultivate it dearly. <br /><br />With all due respect to the poem though, I think gender roles are changing. Yet, it is true the toys children play with as kids, often symbolize the ambition they hold. Consequently your poem makes me think if a girl is given solely kitchen toys, does it affect the scale of her imagination and subtly confines her ambition ?? Its definitely a thought that will fester. Thank you for a stimulating thread. <br /><br />P:S:: <br /><br /> From the comments on my blog, I realize we probably should have a discussion :)<br /><br />I made my blog visible in 2008 but have been writing since 2005. Some of the posts you commented on - well at the time I was just writing for myself and never thought anyone would read them. At the time I made my blog visible, I assumed everyone will just read the newer posts (well most of them do) and left them as it is .... Don't get me wrong - I love that you read the older posts and deeeply appreciate your comments, its just your comment made me read those posts again.... I have changed since the time I wrote like that .... But then again - you will have known that from the articles you've read. :)<br /><br />PPS:: This form of lengthy comment where part has nothing to do with the post - sucks - so pray be kind enough to communicate on email - you can reach me at sanket.korgaonkar@gmail.com :)Sanket Korgaonkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14715918632555733175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-11591970796775552242009-05-20T09:16:25.968-07:002009-05-20T09:16:25.968-07:00Beautifully put :)Beautifully put :)Rishabh P Nairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06950838976812329015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-79535073817289871792009-04-20T09:53:00.000-07:002009-04-20T09:53:00.000-07:00You write beautiful abstract poetry. I wish I had ...You write beautiful abstract poetry. I wish I had the knack and I hope to see more from you. Thank you for commenting on my blog. I wouldn't have found you if you hadn't.Linda Jenkinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14805375148396694390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-78737772084547757122009-03-10T10:47:00.000-07:002009-03-10T10:47:00.000-07:00The Rhyming scheme Was Fantastic Certain words wer...The Rhyming scheme Was Fantastic Certain words were used so nicely that, It felt like I was Talking to You.<BR/>There Are Certain things u can tell about by someones poem u are a thinker & have a certain quest for finding out...<BR/>This power of thought is the weapon which'll help u in the run,I wish GOD endows u with more of it...<BR/><BR/>Keep writing..Take Care...GOD Bless....Shekharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02053685219845152069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-679554641622675912009-02-16T06:54:00.000-08:002009-02-16T06:54:00.000-08:00so true.and so beautifully put.so true.and so beautifully put.Smiling Serpenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15114218375801557084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-15894647077762196362008-11-05T00:42:00.000-08:002008-11-05T00:42:00.000-08:00A nice one......Keep goingA nice one......Keep goingUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12703548329392664709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-43151981664749496812008-11-02T01:39:00.000-07:002008-11-02T01:39:00.000-07:00My first time here:) Great theme, wonderful natura...My first time here:) <BR/><BR/>Great theme, wonderful natural rhyme, and a pertinent message to deliver!<BR/><BR/>Thank you for dropping by at my space with your lovely comment.Usha Pisharodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08569968324374522544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-54318695282190370502008-10-28T09:07:00.000-07:002008-10-28T09:07:00.000-07:00simple and nicely written...i must say... :)simple and nicely written...<BR/>i must say... :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15875416262529831527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-72072641722738907252008-10-05T10:28:00.001-07:002008-10-05T10:28:00.001-07:00i m a bigger fan! great job reneei m a bigger fan! great job reneeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14189538073737956010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-81310132233570649492008-10-05T10:27:00.000-07:002008-10-05T10:27:00.000-07:00I m a bigger fan!! excellent job reneeI m a bigger fan!! excellent job reneeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14189538073737956010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-2493304072478510622008-10-05T10:26:00.000-07:002008-10-05T10:26:00.000-07:00Shiv, I m a bigger fan! Renee superb job!!Shiv, I m a bigger fan! Renee superb job!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14189538073737956010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331395401063630133.post-40315757705740702102008-10-01T05:43:00.000-07:002008-10-01T05:43:00.000-07:00I'm a Fan... Superbly written...I'm a Fan... Superbly written...Shiv...https://www.blogger.com/profile/01434803556484480441noreply@blogger.com